Wednesday, April 27, 2016

main character say

What i would say to the the main character i would say that he really needs to get much better and step it up  and not get in trouble anymore because right know he is at the island and is trying to get it together but i feel that it is not getting that far  in the camp because he needs to get better. at all of his life lessons and so he should just keep being good for now and he should just keep working harder and harder.
He should just stop and keep himself together and he just needs to stop and think a little more about him and not by trying to hurt the bear  he should just leave it alone and not bother it but he should  just stop and say to him self because that way he could leave soon so then that way he can stop and not get in trouble. but so far he has gone from strong to strong and so then that way he will be better and he just needs to not do anything at all.  because he will be like really good but i now see a better change in hm now because he has all of his friends there and so he is starting to realize that he will change because he  needs to and so that is why i think it is a good thing that the to kids where there to help.

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  1. I agree with because cole dose need to step it up and not get in anymore trouble because cole need to straighten up i mean he has been in some much trouble i cant even count how much times he has been in trouble.

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